tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-424901004139451366.post4554371804269112035..comments2023-10-31T02:47:48.702-07:00Comments on The Blurb Doctor Is In: New Before/After: "Tangi's Teardrops"MeiLin Mirandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17590059336785844546noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-424901004139451366.post-14476531099437447332012-01-25T16:21:26.935-08:002012-01-25T16:21:26.935-08:00I could have done it:
Tangi not only belongs ther...I could have done it:<br /><br />Tangi not only belongs there--she's necessary to keep Rosevine alive.<br /><br />More than one way... :)MeiLin Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17590059336785844546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-424901004139451366.post-40817544427929979772012-01-25T15:31:38.874-08:002012-01-25T15:31:38.874-08:00I like the new version. Good job. The last line of...I like the new version. Good job. The last line of the second to last paragraph seems a little off to me. It might just be me though.<br /><br />Tangi not only belongs there but is necessary to keep Rosevine alive.<br /><br />It feels like it needs a pronoun or article.Sybil Nelsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02062481133754431468noreply@blogger.com